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Open Poetry #47

wings of love

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2011-05-22 12:35 PM

          wings of love

Though she be gone
both long and far,
pure and wondrous...
my love has grown wings.
It shall wait and watch
for her forever,
beyond each flaming sunset
across the boundless crimson sea
above these magic mountain-forests
beneath the tentative moonlight
and in every whisper of this
   lonely heart
through the darkest caverns
of eternal night and
   endless time,
and for the certain coming of
an imperishable dawn
   of love's renewal
in a land of finest hopes
   and dreams.

            --- b. e. adams (5/22/2011)

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-05-22 12:57 PM

So lovely and hopeful in the sadness of loss.

Know what I mean?

Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-05-22 05:24 AM

Dear Bruce, how good it feels to read that your love has grown wings. This poem has a wonderful mystic touch to it and it is splendid.

Love,
Margherita

callalily
Junior Member

since 2011-05-22

Posts 22

3 posted 2011-05-22 10:39 AM

yes, some things are so worth hoping for..this is lovely writing

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

4 posted 2011-05-22 01:35 PM

Enjoyed...
*~Coco~*

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-05-24 01:09 AM

Takes love to a new and magical level, Bruce. Always a cut above.
Ida

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