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Open Poetry #47
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Zeigeist
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since 2009-12-09
Posts 311
Michigan
0 posted 2011-05-15 10:58 AM



Fulfilled

With these eyes,
I give thee my love.
A love without pretense or condition,
A love without limits or duration.
With this old man's heart,
I plea for the honor of holding your tears
when your pain dines in.
With these large calloused hands
I would hold you and make
my back your shield from any harm.


If I could do little else in my life
But spend the hours of everyday
Just looking at your beauty,
I would still consider myself
Fulfilled.

Zeitgeist
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-05-15 11:44 AM

Now this is love to be cherished forever and beyond.

Sehr sehr ergreifend!

Exquisite.

Love,
Margherita
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2011-05-15 06:19 PM

This is very, very beautiful, Zeitgeist.  You deserve her, as long as she deserves you.

Owl
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