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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2011-05-14 03:33 PM

     first sight

passing stranger
with eyes
that dim the sun
in all this world
or any universe
of finest imaginings
  and dreams
there can be no equal;
and in this blessed,
fleeting moment
Love is all I know!

       --- b. e. adams (5/14/2011)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-05-14 05:48 PM

Is this a ship passing a ship, Sir?
I enjoyed it!

Follow the wake!

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2011-05-14 06:06 PM

hopefully just a touch of Zenesque Romantic Impressionism

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2011-05-14 06:22 PM

Bruce, the pain of loss, measures the gift of the love that was shared. Those memories are very special and you were indeed blessed to have acquired them, but I know the pain of losing the loved one, is great.

Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-05-14 07:29 PM

Such magic does happen. A glance and the immediate connection brings life's beauty into perfect focus.

And the fleeting moment fixed the eternal awareness.

Wonderfully expressed, dear Bruce.

Love,
Margherita

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2011-05-14 08:12 PM

"Love is all I know!"
And it is all anyone needs to know..
Short, fine work..the kind of poem that can keep one occupied with thought for a long while.
enjoyed

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2011-05-14 09:47 PM

Such are those very special moments!!
Beautifully said, dreamypoet, Sir.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2011-05-15 01:05 PM

Beautiful expression of that first magical moment of recognition, Bruce.
Ida

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2011-05-18 01:11 AM

You know, Bruce, I like what you are writing a lot.

A

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