Open Poetry #47 |
In Woods Of Pine for Nancy Ness |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
In Woods of Pine By Elizabeth Santos For Nancy Ness Upon visiting her childhood home In rural Massachusetts Walls of stone through woods of pine Marked the land that once was mine Where violets spread across the lawn And frogs croaked out from dusk til dawn A house of shingles wood and brick Amongst the trees ten acres thick Was where a family lived its time In cozy rooms of knotty pine A little woodshop painted red Still stands unnoticed by the shed The hand tools of a skillful man Felt comfort in his practiced hand A due respect they still bestow Each lined up neatly in a row As if obediently in place And undisturbed within its space Through autumn wind and winter storm A little woodstove kept him warm And through the woodshop window pane He saw the windy coast of Maine’ He lived in past and future days But in the present misty haze He whittled out of season’s time A Swedish dream in woods of pine Well worn by little booted feet Were footpaths into woodlands deep And gardens on a rocky slope Both vestiges of strength and hope And still the tools remain in place And still the land retains its grace The summer swamps that turn to ice Still lace the fringe of paradise He cared for this, his sacred lot As though God granted him this plot Knowing that his skillful art Would etch these memories in my heart [This message has been edited by Nan (05-15-2011 09:35 AM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Absolutely beautiful. I loved very word and drank in every image with exquisite contentment. Owl |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Liz you always write the most beautiful poems! And, this is no exception. Nan will love it. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I am flabbergasted. This is just a wonderful and sensitive (a word I don't use much) treatment of what we used to call "the old house." I can feel it and smell it and even touch it through your words. I'm happy to have been able to read this, it touched me very much. ~ Plastic surgeons are always making mountains out of molehills. ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Refined poetry that touches the heart with its beauty. Nice that you grace Pip with your presence, dear Elizabeth. Love, Margherita |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lizzy, This is absolutely wonderful. I can't thank you enough for your loving words. While I'm away from my PC, I can't find another photo in my laptop to add to your poem. I can add more when I get home. Meanwhile, I'll send a link to my sister and brother so that they can enjoy it as much as I. You are SUCH a great friend. Love you, dear Lady.. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nan, I love this snowy scene of your childhood home and I'm so happy that you liked the poem. This in a way is a response to that wonderful poem you wrote about Oak Spring, our little house in the woods. Thank you for sharing your long ago memories with me. And to my poet friends, thank you for your kind words. Liz |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So beautiful and touching. It brought tears to my eyes. A keeper for sure. Ida |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Swedish? I didn't know you were a Swede, Nan! I would love to take this whole poem and put it in my boss' window because...behold, the Swede's of Lindsborg would LOVE it! Let me know if I have your permission! Lady Santos...you NEVER let us down! I knew I would enjoy this so much...I just didn't know I might be able to share it with yet another community!!! So the question is - would BOTH of you agree to my sharing it with a Swedish community??? Love, K |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Sometimes in the process of writing poetry I feel that the spirit hands of dead poets touch us. I believe that Robert Frost was your spirit guide here.. He did well guiding your pen, the poem is very human, nature connected-beautiful, just as his were, and still are. A very enjoyable read...thank you |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
It so happens that Emily Dickenson and Robert Frost are my two favorite poets and I can't help but believe that his spirit walks these woods. I am warmed to know he was recognized (a tribute to him) and the answer is yes Thank you sunshine Liz |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
My ancestors are Carlson's and Anderson's - That makes me pretty much a Svenska for sure. Grammie Anderson was actually Finnish, though. That doesn't change me much, does it? My family was actually among the original settlers of New Sweden, Maine - where my Dad was born (a couple of generations later). Of course you have my permission, Karilea - though you really only need Liz's, as she wrote this gem.. Enjoy, and thanks for enjoying the read! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
As always, well crafted and classy. |
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