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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

0 posted 2011-01-03 04:15 PM

when passion dies
thoughtless acts heaps upon amour
when passion dies
proof of love lost is in the eyes
everything's lost if love's not pure
to live lies is just to endure
when passion dies

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2011-01-03 04:58 PM

Well, Jerry old friend, at least after having you here for a while I feel like we're old friends. Writing does that to people, you know, birds of a feather.

I really like this a lot because it's measuring your honesty and I can feel you being unabashedly open about it all.
Sometimes just a few words say so much...

"thoughtless acts heaps upon amour"

Love class 2011 now in session.

Good write Jerry

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2011-01-03 05:11 PM

Thank you very much Eric, and yes, writing and reading and commenting does bring about friendships. I am grateful you found this to be to your taste.

When early morning quietness seeps into my being
it's like I'm being hugged by everything good in the world.—August 16, 2010

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

3 posted 2011-01-03 05:25 PM

My guess, true love needs passion to survive ... not confusing lust with passion of course

on the other hand ... what do I know?

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

4 posted 2011-01-03 06:10 PM

Hahaha!! Poets, and writers of all kinds have been trying to figure out the love phenomena since time immortal. We don't know much more than they did then.

Thanks Rex for being here.

When early morning quietness seeps into my being
it's like I'm being hugged by everything good in the world.—August 16, 2010

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-01-04 08:42 AM

Good write. I get the point.

Lori

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

6 posted 2011-01-04 08:43 AM

Thanks, Lori.

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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2011-01-04 01:41 PM

Spot on, Jerry! "The the love phenomena" - Perhaps it's just how we perceive it to be and considering how many different outlooks and beliefs there are in this world of ours, it's not surprising that there hasn't been and nor will be a definitive description or explanation.

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

8 posted 2011-01-04 02:05 PM

As Winston Churchill said, "It is a riddle, wrapped in a mystery, inside an enigma." although he was speaking of entirely a different matter the words ring true here also.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2011-01-04 07:28 PM

Very nice...James

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

10 posted 2011-01-04 08:20 PM

Thank you James.

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