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kingsangel
Member

since 2009-11-04

Posts 50

0 posted 2011-05-12 03:07 PM

Had to go deaf
so that I could hear
talking in my sleep
makes it all the more clear

Remembering the ending
as it was written then
reflecting on the beginning
finding truth therein

guessing at the questions
knowing the answers never lie
he couldn't care enough
and she hardly tries

knowing without knowing
how I know
as the wicked keep
knowing
without being known ....

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

1 posted 2011-05-12 03:09 PM

Astonishing! Epic

the last two stanzas blew me away

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-05-12 03:19 PM

Wicked stanza's making me grapple with my perception and settle back down and really read your verses. I absolutely love this style of writing.

~ I think the freezer deserves a light as well. ~

kingsangel
Member

since 2009-11-04

Posts 50

3 posted 2011-05-12 03:22 PM

Thank you to both of you....I don't writw very often but every once in a while something just comes to me...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2011-05-12 07:30 PM

I decided to carefully choose the right
Welcome to Passions greeting card to tell
you that you're in the right place for
the times that you will write.

I know the devils of the world when it
comes to listening, and not listening,
and being able to listen when one can't hear...

this is a good poem. I hope you will choose
to write, and often, then share it with us.

Welcome to Passions!

Check your email!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-05-12 09:19 PM

absolutely love this...well crafted!

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-05-13 12:49 PM

kewl brew angel...you know I always require more.

kingsangel
Member

since 2009-11-04

Posts 50

7 posted 2014-07-31 08:42 AM

Thank you and my apologies for waiting so long to reply....

kingsangel

Forlorn Angel
Member
Posts 143

8 posted 2021-03-17 03:55 AM

loved this mostly because I wrote it lol this is an old profile of mine that I thought I created! How can I have these two profiles combined?

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