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Springtime Tornado
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Springtime Tornado |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey 
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Springtime quickly aroused the winds within the two of us. Winds so beautifully similar, but fascinatingly different. Prior to the seasonal shift, our winds danced individually upon the earth, cool and calming, refreshing and tranquil. Two breezes swayed nature in their own territory, lifted the spread wings of birds to new heights, and filled the sails of ships venturing upon the ocean. A wind from the north and one from the south blew incessantly without much commotion until they met mid-Spring. Their sudden encounter caused a twisting of the element, a ravishing tornado, a delightful combination of two now excited gusts of energy. The twisted winds moved together through nature now, brandishing tree branches as weapons of happiness, and stimulating waves in the seas to break up the silence with their song. The tornado was more benevolent than destructive; any witness of its beauty could attest to that… But the enchanting mess of winds was forced to a halt as the north wind continued northward while the south traveled southward. Summertime will allow for our winds to dance individually upon the earth, cool and calming, refreshing and tranquil once again. And though every witness may attest to the fact that each wind is still happy and beautiful, whirling through nature with its simplicity and pleasantness… Something will be missing until autumn causes our winds to meet once more and wrap themselves together in a picturesque chaos. *Amber |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey |
Oops.. Forgot to add this to my private library before posting it! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
THIS is BEAUTIFULLY done, my friend. I love it. Very refreshingly worded I might add. jimmy ---a few poem readings later ---- Just re-read and can't tell you how much I like this...very, very well done. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Very ingenuous way to describe loves awakening along with the changing of the seasons. Very expert and professional. ~ I think we should only read books that wound and stab us.-Kafka ~ |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey |
Jimmy- Thank you so much! It makes me happy to know that you enjoyed it! JerryPat- Thanks a lot! |
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