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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-05-11 07:53 PM

if i told you that
i loved you
would you turn around
and walk away
or would you stay
and let me love you
with a love long lasting
and forever true

i have kept my love
for you a secret
but i can not shut
it inside much longer
i'm losing my hold
you told me you're
so proud of me
but you can't show it
still i know it
won't you tell me more
of your heart's secrets

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-05-11 10:23 PM

Ah shucks / Red in the face / Really? / Oh, you're talking about that other guy . . .Haha

~ I think we should only read books that wound and stab us.-Kafka ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2011-05-12 09:57 AM

Ah, my friend, an old and beautiful girlfriend of mine told me when we were City Park-walking in New Orleans (in our teens it's so long ago) that she had a secret lover - then pulled out a bunch of poems I'd written her.

Your loving piece above brought back that memory...thank you much, hadn't thought of her in a while. A pleasant memory to keep for sure.

j.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-05-12 09:31 PM

well, JerryPat....it could've been you, too...that's my secret..ha!

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-05-12 09:32 PM

j-thanks so much, my friend....your comments meant a lot to me

love,

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

[This message has been edited by faithmairee (05-14-2011 10:26 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2011-05-14 10:08 AM

Secrets sometimes exercise great fascination ... the process of unraveling them assures excitement.

Love this.

Love,
Margherita

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-05-14 10:27 AM

Dear Margherita-Thank you so much, my friend. I'm glad you liked it.

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2011-05-14 11:02 PM

Fine writing...James

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