don't ever say i didn't love you

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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-05-09 07:31 PM

don't ever say i didn't love you
with everything i had
of all the people in all the world
you picked me to treat bad
i wasn't the one who cheated
nor the one who always liked to fight
if you'll remember it was you
who tried to make a wrong thing right

don't ever say i didn't love you
the way that a wife should
if anything most everyone would say
i treated you too good
i wasn't in it for myself
i loved you as good as anybody could

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-05-09 07:40 PM

. . . and that is all that you can do, Faith . . .

~ I think we should only read books that wound and stab us.-Kafka ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-05-09 07:43 PM

i know you are right but it's still sad...i know all men are not like my ex but i still have no real desire to get married again

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2011-05-10 03:52 AM

you have to tell some truths and balance your sentiments, thanks faithmairee for the touching share.

yann

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

4 posted 2011-05-10 08:10 AM

Sorry you had to experience the sour taste of 'love'. Writing helps, well done Faith

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-05-10 08:17 AM

Sorry you got burned...but I am glad you don't feel "incomplete" unmarried. Keep writing girlfriend!
lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-05-10 05:54 PM

Dear yann-
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. It is so nice having you stop by.

Love.

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-05-10 05:56 PM

Dear EmmaRose-Thank you for your lovely comments. You are right. Writing this did help me a lot. Time has helped to heal the rest.

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

8 posted 2011-05-10 05:57 PM

Dear Lori-Thanks you for your wonderful remarks but especially for your friendship. It means a lot to me.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2011-05-15 09:26 PM

Nice writing...James

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