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Open Poetry #47

Mother's Day Observations

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2011-05-07 12:51 PM

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Yellow
garage sale signs
popping up all over
like sunny faced dandelions
crossing neighbors' green lawns
precious keepsakes
Posies

.

~*~
(c) KRJ Mom's wkend 5-7-11

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

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Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2011-05-07 01:11 PM

Lovely, Karilea.

Owl

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-05-07 02:26 PM

Interesting take and one that I concur and like.

~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

3 posted 2011-05-07 04:15 PM

Your scenery promises fun, dear Karilea. By and for mothers in a certain sense.

Very lovely.

Love and Happy Mother's Day,
Margherita

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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4 posted 2011-05-07 08:43 PM

Ah...a new favorite.

Brief without being terse, and impressionistic without being busy.

Very very lovely, and rather sad, too.

Martie

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5 posted 2011-05-07 11:59 PM

Sissie....love this new look on you! Happy mother's Day xoxoxox

2islander2
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by the sea

6 posted 2011-05-08 04:45 AM

adorable, such a poem, thanks sunshine for this favorite.

yann

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