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baskin with gwendolynne robins |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I opened the door for her slowly not that her limbs were better than nature but they were longer in ascending and heaven was somewhere just above that gucci horizon she didn't mind she wore my eyes better than most others said she was comfortable in their boldness could read my mind like a fortune cookie too didn't take any longer she said and she could always plan on the outcome I played hard to get all the way around to the driver side of her jaguar then let myself seem easy getting in as if I didn't mind being used this way to help her with her decadent cravings though they far exceeded just thirty one _____________ daark (scribblenote..short drive to baskin robbins..well there is a cigar bar next door) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Amazing ... just amazing how creatively you bask in the light of a unique inspiration... or was it the pleasant smoke-cloud of your cigar? Either way the "outcome" is glistening. Again, every line "ein Treffer" ... a hit! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady for the glances |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Much enjoyed, Dark, especially the middle stanza. Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady Owl...they have ice cream shops here...baskin robbins 31 flavors...needless to say it is a fun place to visit. thanks lady |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
How on earth did you know I was wondering about that? Duh! Blush, blush! The lady hails from South Africa, and we don't have that here! Wow! It most certainly does sound a fun place to visit! When I went to Greece in 1978, there was a shop in Athens, which was famous for its ice-cream flavours (I don't know how many they had, but there were lots!), and ohhhhhh, how delicious they were (well, the ones I tried), esPECially as Athens experienced the hottest heatwave in 50 years, the day that I went to that ice-cream shop! Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady Owl...I guess it was your wicked smile that gave away your curiosity...the heat does draw out the ice cream crowd |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
My wicked smile, eh? Smiles (wicked ones!). Owl |
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twistedpup Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115 |
great poem, good read for a night that i cant sleep, thank you. *hugs* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
glad to keep you up TP..thanks |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You carve your curvesives so gracefully... how can anyone not smile at you!?  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...as long as you do...I am pleased...thanks babe |
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