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tipshoe sigh songs |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were lovely on your tiptoes like your little girl shoes were on pretending to be tall enough to look in those windows there you turned too quickly for my eyes and caught me looking down and there too, more slowly but I noticed your smile after and how you wrote submission down in the warm sand by your sighs then erased it part of the way leaving just enough for me to know your answers would all be woman sounds ______________ daark |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What's wrong with me? I'm understanding your poetry more and more. At least I think I do, please don't burst my bubble and say I don't. Yes, they notice that downward look and soon, if the stars are aligned correctly, they do began those women sounds. ~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance. ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
JP..scary huh...thanks guy. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Enchanting, Dark. Owl |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
A very sensous read, at least thats what i got from it. But i enjoyed it! lol Dreamgal  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady Owl, thank you lady _____________ dreamgal, thank you for the read ms |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You are ever soft sighs, man...enjoyed and glad to find you still here! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Having to smile at JP's response.... what a woman knows, is seen.... what a man knows.... is sometimes a quiet secret. And yes, even those who might not respond, but only read? Yes, they will smile, too. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I looked out the window, listened to a breeze and I smiled. Ali-san |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You elicit the most passionate tunes in every woman's heart with your outstanding, sensuous, yet delicate sigh song poems such as this one. You are the Master. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms dinina, thank you lady!! ________________ ms sun, grinning here..thanks much babe _______________ ms ali-san, arrigoto oatmeal _________________ ms mar, thank you sweet lady for the glances |
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