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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. How stupid— Old lives past loves Up in smoke . |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at you... you always make me go out to look behind your poems... smoking, indeed.  |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
You always have such a great way with getting a point across with so few words. Like sunshine said you do have to look behind the words to sometimes figure out the meaning but that is what makes your writing so interesting each and every time. Your very talented! Dreamgal  |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you both There's sometime else in that the first line is also an allusion to Issa's death poem: A bath when you're born A bath when you die How stupid A favorite poet for me Thanks again John . |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
It's the rare snowman that sports an Ascorti pipe or gold doubloon eyes. Do yeti know of corncobs? Do corncobs know of yeti? A good thought-provoking poem you have posted. Thanks. |
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