Open Poetry #47 |
Reflections |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Reflections Trumpet swan The sun sets on the still lake The water trembles -Juju |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Very very good I always read you John . |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
John is so right and I must thank him for getting to this before I did... Excellent piece, Juju... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your "Reflections" filled me to overflow, becoming the swan, the sun and the water ... Extraordinarily beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. I was drawn back to this It really takes great talent to make time stand still With your permission, I would like to include this in my Word file of poems by others John . |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
This was very serene and very beautiful with so few words. Dreamgal |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
John you have my permission Juju -Juju |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
It is well-imaged. Aye, ripples never come back... except as you have recalled them here. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, Juju! Brought a sense of peace into my world. Helen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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