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Dawn Brink Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44South Africa |
Trembling at the future now because I know I have it all laugh at all that comes, at all that gets thrown this way but what if it's all blown away You can hit me, you can. Any of your arrows, that spear thrust. I'll laugh at you, I have it all. Love is all. Life is all. I may not have your love I'm alive, laughing. I'll laugh at you, I'll laugh with you if you want to we can laugh, tremble, together. But if you don't want to, together, then I'll laugh and tremble and laugh alone. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Well said, Dawn! You go, girl! Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Laughter is healing and you got it all right here. Very good. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Dawn....perfect plan and poise...enjoyed it |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
LOVE IT!!! A big hi five for you! lol In all seriousness this was a very good write. Dreamgal |
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Dawn Brink Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44South Africa |
Thank you very much everyone |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Read this again and like it even more because it speaks of love and acceptance...of what will be will be...James |
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