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Open Poetry #47

Dear precious one

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

0 posted 2011-05-02 09:54 AM

Dear precious one,
my beautiful son,
with whom that i adore.
I wish i could
keep you just like
this, so innocent
and pure.
It melts my heart
when I hear you say
that im your "bestest
friend" this priceless
gift you give to me,
you'll never comprehend.
My beautiful son,
you are the one,
that brings the sunshine
in, for on those days
when dark clouds lay,
i know i cant cave in.
You'll never know
that you saved me, when
i couldnt save myself,
you entered my life,
and made it right.
my dear sweet precious
one.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-05-02 10:18 AM

quote:
You'll never know
that you saved me, when
i couldnt save myself,

Wonderful song of gratitude for your beloved son, dear Dreamgal. Yes they do that for us, especially before getting exposed to the world's harshness, when they are pure and innocent just as you say!

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-05-02 10:25 AM

Beautifully rendered. 'Nuff said.

~ Borrow money from pessimists -- they don't expect it back. ~

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

3 posted 2011-05-02 12:44 PM

Ty Margherita and Jerry!

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