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Tanka, Louise
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Tanka, Louise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Tanka Louise Smiles were our steady Apples sliced by slender hands Sharing warm baked bread We prepared us together Sharing cheesy life stories ~*~ A Thursday memory For Louise © KRJ 4-28-11 66018 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Very special Tanka, Sunshine. A rich look back at special times. Nice. ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I can just see the two of you!  Lori |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....Delicious!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and so were the stories, sissie... thank you Lori...she was a gas, wasn't she? Jerry...you would've wanted to have been there...very special moments, indeed! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The warmth of your bond so beautifully rendered here, dear Karilea. Love, Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I hope someday someone rememebers me as you remember Louise from deep in the heart |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
K A beautiful tribute...she was very lucky to have you as a friend.. This poem says that that bond, that friendship still remains strong.. -that bright "Sunshine" still falls on her shoulders.. Even if she has passed into another realm, of a different kind of light. BTW...This is very good use of the form..which I am very fond of. Namaste f |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi sunshine, what a beautiful and harmonious scene, make jealous to not be here, I adore this great poem... yann |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
A friendship/relationship so special should be shared to give hope to those without. You've done a wonderful job Karielea. There's something about the poem that really grabbed me. All poetry should do that. Umfortunately it's rare that it does. |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Sorry for spelling your name incorrectly. My bad. |
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