Open Poetry #47 |
Pansies (haiku) |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* * * Pansies mock girlies: playful they sway in the sun to show off gay robes * * * |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like your poem and I like pansies (the flower) Juju -Juju |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
WoW! Great thought process went into the construction of this delightful haiku, Margherita! ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Pretty little pansies o how you glow |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very pretty, I love pansies. They look like little faces to me. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, my dear Poet friends and lovers of pansies, for your loving replies. Love, Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Hi M.......:-) Very nice haiku.. I planted a lot of panzies today..It was nice to see your poem and picture. Namaste ice |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are truly a breath of fresh air!! |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
This is perfect to start spring off with. The color and beauty of flowers and such a pretty expression to go along with. Dreamgal |
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Dawn Brink Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44South Africa |
Lovely |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love playful pansies and I love this haiku. xoxox A |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I love this poem too, I like pansies but I don't know what else it can be (exept a flower) yann |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
delightful Margherita both haiku and pansies |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Margherita - Flowers are like women, soft to the touch, fragrant to the smell and wonderful to look at as they sway in the breeze of the sun. Whoa! I feel a haiku coming on. This I liked much M. Namyh |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved this ... the squirrels have now done my pansies in, but yours definitely fill the void. j. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Lovely, both the intrepid poem and the pic. Speaking of the latter, those two flowers could be sisters careful not to be wearing the same color dresses. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As playful as a breeze on a summer's day. Lovely |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Absolutely delightful, Margherita. Further to what Ida said, my mother used to call them cat's faces. I don't know if that was a Scottish thing (as she was Scottish). Does anyone who reads this know? Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, so many wonderful loving comments! Thank you all, my dear Poet friends. It's nice to know you enjoyed this. As to "cat's faces", dear Owl, I only found this link, but it gives a hint: http://www.pansy-cats.com/index.shtml . Love and hugs to all. Margherita |
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