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gdcod3player Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 70California |
What is the best? Your eyes glowing at night? When were riding around all day? The air blows your hair in the sunshine Nothing can take my dream away I thought i had you figured out But you turned that around The words made me lose my mind Went on vacation When you say there is no reason why How can i figure out whats wrong with me |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is surely nothing wrong with you, but you better accept that women are mysterious beings ... it's difficult "to figure them out"  . And love always "blows" the mind ...  Lovely. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Pay attention to Margherita, my friend. ~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~ |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
The only thing I can see wrong is that your write nearly not enough. I can't wait for more. Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE |
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