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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
exhilaration ecstasy in cloud-cover sublime like moon-dust dancing through the corridors of time sweet dreams sobbing find sycophants kneeling like heart-thrusts throbbing in love-lust appealing and the sky clears her face on a cloudless day belaying exhilaration bequeathing exultation in ecstasy sublime |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr...enjoyed this...sycophants is such a cool name for a gourmet in training (grin) |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sweet! (and hot) Lori |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Steaven Love the title because it's such a good intro to your smooth gracious verses. Really very nice images. You play off it well. Eric Love does not look after it's own interests. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Nice work / True emotion / "Love-lust appealing" / Oh yeah . . . Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Dark, smiling back at you…wasn’t sure that word would be appreciated…now I am glad I left it in…loved your definition of it Lori, ‘ppreciate it…seems what I have been thinking lately comes out differently on paper…glad you liked it Eric, thank you for the kind review…glad you read it and commented JerryPat, thank you, sir…almost took that phrase out…then thought to myself, “it’s a true descriptive phrase”…glad you found it enjoyable |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
great writing as usual...enjoyed it much! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful and sensitive as always, Steaven. You are a wordsmith par excellence! Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
faithm, coming from a deep south gal, I am honored (always intrigued by that phrase ‘deep south’)…thank you Owl, you are far too generous and much too kind…but if I really try, I will accept your amazing compliment without too much false humility  |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Ecstasy Sublime...Wonderful images. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Giggles at your reply, Steaven! Owl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and the sky clears her face on a cloudless day ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ohhhhh that's so pretty, I want to go there.  Excellent poem, steavenr~ |
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