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Open Poetry #47
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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
0 posted 2011-04-22 02:54 AM


CONNECTION
21 April 2011

Whispers in the wind
in swirled pastel secrets
swathed themselves around her
like strong arms gently
and she soft-smiled
at the word whisperer
in blue-eyed, lilting, lark-laughter
wrapped in pas de deux ribbons
and glance of sun-touch.

Owl
© Copyright 2011 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2011-04-22 06:49 AM

lady owl...

lovely way to entwine ms!!
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2011-04-22 07:05 AM

Thanks for enjoying it, DS.  Smiles.

Owl
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2011-04-22 09:24 AM

Another beauty Owl.
Lori
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2011-04-22 09:31 AM

Thanks for your kind words, Lori.

Owl
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
5 posted 2011-04-22 11:00 AM

Great bit of wordplay here, Owl. I'm not surprise, however, you are consistent with writing above the norm.

~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
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Durban, South Africa
6 posted 2011-04-22 11:57 AM

Thanks Jerry, for your very kind words.

Owl
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2011-04-22 08:11 PM

The things you do with words, Diana. We should all be so talented.
                               Ida
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
8 posted 2011-04-23 02:37 AM

Thank you, Ida for your very kind words . . . but you are!

Owl
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