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Open Poetry #47

David and Goliath

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2011-04-19 11:08 PM

David and Goliath

Little bird
The wind blows eastward to home
Don't we look so small?

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2011-04-20 12:26 PM

Intense.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-04-20 05:34 PM

One way of looking at it. It is all a matter of perception.

~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2011-04-25 12:28 PM

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Juju,

You're going to make careers
for those who study your poetry
long after we're all gone . . .

John

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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2011-04-25 12:42 PM

aw what the heck...won't let this one slip past 3rd line....

enjoyed it much , my friend...

j.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-04-25 01:22 PM

and without their shadows to add length
which of them was which? to the winged one.

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

6 posted 2011-04-25 02:58 PM

Simple, full of the image, great job. I have truly missed reading you since I have been away.

Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2011-04-27 06:40 PM

Nice...James

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