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Open Poetry #47

Suzy My Baby

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-01-13 07:15 PM

Suzy My Baby

Suzy my baby
you're driving me crazy
without even trying
I'm not exaggerating
I'm not lying,
when you're around
there's magic in the air
there's magic in the air.
there's magic in the air,
releasing me to share
the feelings of my heart
with you precious you,
your sweetness seducing me,
your softness caressing me,
my feelings and my desires
treasuring the pleasure of you
setting me free
embracing the
sensuality
of love.

JamesLee
09January
2011

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-13 07:22 PM

Okay, this catchy little ditty had me humming to myself, humming to myself I say . . . HUMMING.

"Whoever is not in his coffin and the dark grave let him know he has enough."-Robert Goolrick from "Reliable Wife"

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-01-13 08:09 PM

a big WOW for this one...i love how romantic it is...it flows so nicely, too...great poem!

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2011-01-15 09:07 AM

Hi James, I knew a girl called suzy too, it can be devastating when they break your heart, thanks for the excellent poem.

yann

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2011-01-15 12:18 PM

James

Sounds like Suzy is quite the girl.
Like the passion you put into these emotions.

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

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