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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-04-15 06:04 PM

JAZZ FLUTTER
15 April 2011

Mountain stream piano
notes bubbling over pebbles
slow-birthing my joy

Owl

[This message has been edited by OwlSA (04-15-2011 07:07 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-04-15 06:09 PM

Sweet! Soothing read Owl.
Lori

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-04-15 06:11 PM

Thank you, Lori. Smiles.

Owl

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2011-04-16 10:14 AM

wonderful Diana, I can hear and feel the place, I loved it.

yann

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2011-04-16 11:32 AM

Thank you, Yann. I am glad you can. Smiles.

Owl

Word Weaver
Member

since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

5 posted 2011-04-16 01:13 PM

This is Haiku at its best. BRAVO!

Write On~
Marcia

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2011-04-16 01:42 PM

Thank you, Marcia. You sure make my insides (and my outsides!) smile.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2011-04-16 03:53 PM

I can see you word that vividly as I read.

~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2011-04-16 04:27 PM

Thanks, Jerry. Smiles.

Just for the record, with regard to your new signature quote, we don't have alligators here, but crocodiles. I never insult crocodiles - nor would I alligators -neither before nor after I have crossed the river. I wouldn't have reason to insult the precious little, medium and big sweetie-pies!

Owl

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

9 posted 2011-04-16 11:54 PM

ah, this is great.. love the poem

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

10 posted 2011-04-17 01:10 AM

Thank you, Faith. I am glad you did.

Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2011-04-17 09:01 AM

You are on a roll ... hmmm (it just was something like a memory transmitted to my fingers ... went to check this expression and I am happy to discover that it means exactly what I wanted to express

.

I mean you are wonderfully inspired and you create absolutely stunning poetry.

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

12 posted 2011-04-17 02:59 PM

Thank you, Margherita!

Owl

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2011-04-17 03:46 PM

Diana....my kind of music!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

14 posted 2011-04-17 06:24 PM

Thank you, Martie. I'm glad you could relate so well and that you enjoyed it.

Owl

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