Open Poetry #47 |
Yesterday |
Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
"Yesterday" Birds are singing ...without harmony Sun is shining ....without warmth Blooming flowers ...provide no scent Paper... is curling ...pen ...running dry My world ....is void of color I remember inspiration ~A yesterday thing The great man is dead...I cannot write © Marcia Miller-Twiford 2/2011 [This message has been edited by Word Weaver (04-13-2011 07:31 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'm sorry you cannot write because this was good! I love it when poets write about not being able to write (myself included) Lori |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
I thought this was very pretty, for someone who cant write, I agree with lori. And sometimes in a twisted way, ive found some of my best writing when I describe my feelings of not being able to write. Dreamgal |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You did quite enough to get the message across. ~ At the siege of Vienna in 1683 Islam seemed poised to overrun Christian Europe. We are in a new phase of a very old war. ~ |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Thank you Jerry. I guess someday I'll get use to the loss and write of different things. For now it works as therapy for me and it helps that he's channeling. Gone? Yes, but still everywhere. |
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