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the little things |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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He doesn’t realize What he does for me My heart sings It’s the little things I just close my eyes And I can see him vividly So longingly I wait patiently For him to do them again LGR©4/12/11 |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Oh sounds like someone is in looovee. Good for you! And a pretty piece of poetry. Dreamgal |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks dreamgal- I am!  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Doesn't sound to me like you're waiting patiently, sounds to me like you are chomping at the bit. By the way, I'm in the process of getting down with that ice cream you forced me to go and buy. ~ At the siege of Vienna in 1683 Islam seemed poised to overrun Christian Europe. We are in a new phase of a very old war. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yeah, it was fun twisting your arm! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yummy! ~ At the siege of Vienna in 1683 Islam seemed poised to overrun Christian Europe. We are in a new phase of a very old war. ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is really great, Lori...short and sweet and so genuine There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Faith, I'm always happy to hear from you! Your comment means alot. Lori |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you certainly do sound like you are in love...great, isn't it! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
yes ! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Extra pleasant and romantic. Eric |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
The brevity of this write is one of the things that makes it so great. Happy anticipation, Marcia |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
thanks Eric and Marcia for the read, I'm glad you liked it Lori |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
as long as you have balloons and ice cream cones, sand dollars and castles, and are able to see the sun in a storm, it'll always be so my friend . . . as usual, enjoyed your words. j. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely poem and even lovelier to hear a REALLY happy, true story. I enjoyed your poem and the comments, and thought that Jimmy's reply was a beautiful prose-poem in itself. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very lovely, dear Lori. You are so right, those little things make our days! Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...I'm a fan of little things...you expressed it beautifully. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, you did and I love this too. A |
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