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My unwanted guest...
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My unwanted guest... |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Fear just enters my life without permission. Like an armed robber it sneaks in and trys to steal my joy. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It does that, doesn't it, dreamgal? Wonder if Wal Mart sells fear remover in a spray can? Worth looking into. ~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I just HATE it when I comment on something and it doesn't post it on the site I commented on. ~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~ |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
You might be on to something there Jerry, if you could patent it and sell it you'd be a rich man! lol Dreamgal |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i sure can relate to this one...i like how you said so much in so few words...nice one, dreamgal There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Thank you Faith, I appreciate that, it is so true isnt it? Dam that intruder!! lol Dreamgal |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I know, it could at least knock or better yet, make an appointment... Enjoyed this dreamy girl. Richard  |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
Fear always knows exactly how to play you doesn't it? I know the felling all to well. I can definitely relate to this write! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, I really like how you put that. Well written, my friend. j. |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
I had unexpected visits from fear and it sure loves to over stay it's welcome. Poem well written.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Unwanted guest indeed, but so meddlesome! You said this very well, dear dreamgal. ... we need to make a bundle of all those impulses of fear and launch it far away from us, so that we can catch our harmonious, trusting breath again. Love and joy. Margherita |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Keep up the good fight and don't let fear steal anything from you. Especially your joy and ability to express yourself through poetry. oxoxo A |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Oh Allison ty so much your too kind! I try not too writing means so much to me like everyone here. I appreciate your encouragement!!! Dreamgal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Ty James, much appreciated! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Perhaps it is the history of your sorrow that is this unwanted guest, the one that tries to steal your joy.. Perhaps it is like Frost's November guest.. "My Sorrow, when she's here with me, Thinks these dark days of autumn rain Are beautiful as days can be;" Fear, to me is like that-- it thinks November days are beautiful.. But we have the ability , most of the time to turn them into May. Your little poem dug all of that stuff out of my little brain...that shows how effective it is.... :-) |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Why thank you ice, i so appreciate that. lol Dreamgal |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Darn. How'd I miss this one, Dreamgal. Short, not so sweet when the fear ogre is about. ~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~ |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Jerry..... Look above!!! LOL "smack in head" geezz Dreamgal |
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