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Alison's Addiction (from the Poetry Workshop)
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Alison's Addiction (from the Poetry Workshop) |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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Alison's Addiction Dreamy thoughts occupy my mind Fuel desire to make my heart race Kidnap me from a mundane grind Nothing ever will take your place All agree I was born to pine Satisfaction, your kiss will grace Dreamy thoughts occupy my mind Fuel desire to make my heart race Such addiction wraps like a bind Oh! Hide my need and leave no trace Ice cream bar crumbs cover my face Many kinds remain to taste and find Dreamy thoughts occupy my mind - Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Alison, I love your addiction to poetry above all, the poem for me is kind of success, I feel that and I would like so much to free my thoughts, I wish My comment is not all confusing, I love your words, your excellent poem and dreamy thoughts (such a lovely expression). yann |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Alison is addicted to poetry and I am addicted to Alison's poetry! The fertility of your mind is a beautiful thing, snow dweller.....we'll never get enough  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely delightful, dear Alison! We must thank also Balladeer who succeeds in always inspiring you to try new forms of poetry. In whatever style you write there is your creativity in the main role ... So much enjoyed. Love, Margherita  |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is so beautifully expressed...a great wonderful poem you've got here There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
yann, I can not express how happy your comments always make me feel. You are a wonderful person and that shows in everything you write and share with us. Thank you. xoxoxo Alison - Oh man, Balladeer, you kept me going when I thought I couldn't. If it were not for you and your lessons, I would have just floated away. Thank you for everything. Love, Alison - Margherita, You are more right than you may know. Thank you very much, my lovely friend. xoxoxo Alison - faithmairee Thank you. This poem kind of spilled out as I typed ... and ate an ice cream bar. xoxoxo Alison |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
You eat ice cream in ALASKA, Alison! Brrrr! Even more brrr! at the thought of you not writing - ouch! Thank you Balladeer! Much enjoyed your poem and its delightful spontaneity. Owl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Alison, this is fun. This is so you! Thanks for the smile Lori |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Alison, Nice fun write, maybe should be "addictions", lol, (poetry and Klondike bars). I kinda go for the "Bi-Polar" bars myself. Doc |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I'm jealous . . . (nothing funny intended!) j. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hey I wanna hide behind ice cream crumbs too... and feed my own addiction, of you. Lemme guess... it was a Klondike Bar?! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Now I want to know what a Klondike bar tastes like. Is that what they're really called? Alison - a great write! I am hopeless at form poetry so I applaud you! Helen |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Owl, Alaskans eat more ice cream per capita in the winter than any other state. Or so I have read. Thank you for all your supprot and love. xoxoxo Alison - LGB, Thank you for smiling. A - Doc, Bi-Polar bars. Ha! Thank you for the early morning laugh. A - Jimmy, I am jealous of your photography. So we are even. Thank you, my friend. Alison - Richy, You and Balladeer know me too dang well. Yep. Thank you, friend of mine. Alison - Helen, Thank you for reading. I just like to write, but I do enjoy learning, and using, various forms of poetry. I tip my hat to Balladeer for having the patience to teach me. And yes - there are yummy Klondike bars. Vanilla ice cream with chocolate covering an crispy things in the chocolate. Yummm. Love 'em. xooxxo A |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now those are the kind of dreamy thoughts that can make one's tummy smile! I love ice cream but I have to do with frozen yogurt on a stick ~ which ain't have bad either! Enjoyed your cute poem, Cutie Pie! Love you! Linder Lou |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Love you too, Holler Girl. Thank you, my dear friend. xoxoxo Lasky Girl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Wow about the amount of ice-cream Alaskans eat, Alison! Owl |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, Owl. Wow! is right! xoxoxo A |
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