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Open Poetry #47

Tanka..cheer, cheer

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2011-04-09 05:11 AM

spur on
the lavender's thrusting call,
mere no contender
in the parochial garden--
but cheer, cheer, this forthrightness
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..(C) 2011 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Harmony
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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-04-09 11:27 PM

Oh spring is a tanka to be, just waiting to bloom.

Just lovely~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2011-04-10 02:46 AM

superb and a surprising write, very enjoyable.

yann

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2011-04-10 05:26 AM

..BluesSerenade & yann..>>thanks so
much for the positive comments..>>spiros
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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-04-10 04:43 PM

Very captivating.

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2011-04-10 04:55 PM

I'm smiling...you are indeed channeled,
and so most of us are just now
into the welcome of spring,
and you lavendered the day just so...

beautifully!

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

6 posted 2011-04-10 10:31 PM

..Margherita and Sunshine, thanks much..when
you two ladies of Poetry (is it poetesses
or poets?) like one of my poems, i feel more assured i've written something worthwhile..

..spiros
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