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Open Poetry #47

In the dance..

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

0 posted 2011-04-08 11:25 PM

She dances like a beautiful
swan.
Delicate, & graceful in
each purposeful step.
Surrendering...
At peace in "the dance"
where darkness disappears.
And graceful silohuettes,
like birds of a
feather, prance delicately
in there movements.
A world disappears if only
for a moment...
in the dance.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-04-08 11:35 PM

Very soft - this dance seems almost a whisper.

A

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

2 posted 2011-04-08 11:47 PM

Thanks Allison, I appreciate it.

Dreamgal

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-04-11 11:27 AM

"A world disappears if only
for a moment."

...don't you just love those moments when you get them...nice write, portrayed excellently

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

4 posted 2011-04-11 11:48 AM

Thank you Steven, appreciate you stopping by.

Dreamgal

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2011-04-11 11:58 AM

What a soothing, surreal piece of writing, dear dreamer gal!

Lovely!

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

6 posted 2011-04-11 12:02 PM

Thank you Earthangel, i appreciate that.

Dreamgal
*smiles*

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