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Open Poetry #47

Angel

gdcod3player
Member

since 2009-09-13

Posts 70
California

0 posted 2011-01-13 12:57 PM

You are my end to the road
The sense i lost when you took control
Break my silence and let me pass
My heart has fought for a reason to cast
Your name has me dreaming for too much
I have lost all my pain since you came my way
You are the angel that still isn't here today

I have gotten away with everything
My heart has never been caught
Till tonight

There was a sense that i cant doubt
I love you
You have been on my mind
I dont want to hide away
I can hear someone screaming
Let me take you home
I want your kiss tonight
The end of my heart has been given to you tonight
I want to give you my time
Dont let it just pass by

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-01-13 05:31 AM

Love it.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2011-01-13 07:00 AM

I guess you could have renamed this "Head Over Heels." Nice work.

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-01-13 10:28 AM

interesting write...I found the line "You are the angel that still isn't here today" extremely poignant...nicely done

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-01-13 02:21 PM

very profound and finely penned...i love it!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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