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Open Poetry #47

The Ways of you..

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

0 posted 2011-04-06 12:10 PM

A kiss on
your lips,
oh what bliss,
a kiss on your
lips brings me.

A thrill like
no other, our
lips melt like
butter, so soft
I fall completely.

I'm under your
spell, so hard,
have i fell, so
deeply in love
w/you.

Like sinking in
sand, I dont want
to land, for im
mesmorized by
you.

Dreamgal

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-04-06 05:02 AM

Isn't that just a wonderful state to be in, dear dreamgirl? Sometimes it feels good to put aside the rational mind and to just feel.

This is lovely.

Love,
Margherita

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

2 posted 2011-04-06 07:38 AM

Thanks Margherita! As always, for commenting on my poem!

Love,
Dreamgal
*smiles*

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2011-04-06 09:14 AM

Cool and true...!

j.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-04-06 10:47 AM

Great feeling, isn't it, dreamgal?

~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

5 posted 2011-04-06 11:36 AM

Sure is Jerry!

Dreamgal
*smiles*

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2011-04-08 11:11 AM

I especially like the sinking into the sand.
It's a great feeling to dig our feet in and let go at the same time!

Nice poem~

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

7 posted 2011-04-08 11:24 AM

Thanks Blues Serenade I agree!

Dreamgal

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