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Open Poetry #47

Sad, my reverie

easy1
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since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2011-04-04 02:27 PM

Sad, my reverie...
My stallion's ears flattening,
close lightning, thunder!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2011-04-04 08:18 PM

Mark

This does promote thoughts of wild images.

Took me right back into the wild west but I know that's not where you're going with it.

Eric

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2011-04-04 10:59 PM

I think what I like about this most is what I don't understand about it...that mysterious ingredient that has made me re-read it so many times, yet teases me in that I still haven't mastered it...a very provocative write...

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2011-04-05 08:38 AM

You in your reverie were not aware of the imminent storm, but your stallion was and the flattened ears tried to signal it.

Love this.

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2011-04-06 10:53 AM

I saw a storm (internal and/or external) building, strong and over powering and I felt your words insise. I like this.

Alison

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2011-04-06 07:11 PM

You write with a keen sense of wonderment.

Nice verse, easy1~

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