Open Poetry #47 |
spill of whispers moan |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you said you liked the feel of our oil how it swallowed your finger ends like a warm wet mouth that was hungry and when you spilled it from your seam how it shimmered on your skin there like a lover's eyes were coating you and did I mind you not wearing much when we walked down to silver strand with the afternoon wanting to disturb how we combined our proper and wicked between the jeans of each others denim like we were one melted sin sensation that was turning from glass to liquid ____________ daark |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Feeling the slippery in your liquid dreams O Mr. Obama, let's go domestic. Let the man drill HERE in my very shore. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I never know where you will take me when I click onto one of you parables, Mr. DS, I only know I thoroughly enjoy the unique way you have of getting to wherever you are headed. Write on! ~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ER..thank you for your eyes on this diesel spill ms. _______________ JP...just an exercise in environmental instability more or less...thanks guy! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well now, this is hot stuff. From glass to liquid. Not every couple can do that. But then you probably always fancied a glass blower in your life. Love this stuff of yours as usual. Take care Eric |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"how we combined our proper and wicked between the jeans of each others denim like we were one melted sin sensation" ...wow...what vivid imagery these words display...astounding write |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
just makes me want to mumble things. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Always enjoy the sensual twist of your words, Mr. Dark! Helen |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
et..thanks so much amigo _____________ steavenr, thank you so much ______________ ms ali-san, I adore your lips when they don't know what to say _____________ ms honeyb...thank you lady friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Gazes can do that sometimes, such a uniquely beautiful thought. It's all just very special. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend...you bless me |
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