Open Poetry #47 |
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The Wind Of Missed |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
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The blaze, is peeping over the circumference. Crawling its way over the fringes, of dawn’s hem. Fingers and tongues of thirsty flickers licking at the blackbird of shaved slumber, nesting in clouds of coal and dewy missions nocturnal, as embers of obsidian disintegrate into starless eyes of milky soot, tween hearth of flux and tides, of light in the yawn of sunrise, as the adolescence of a new day, begins to walk… through the pitchforks of dark, this wild fire, of glow into dim as the hours wee, wain into the sol, of silent promises. What is it, that makes me run from the radiant? This glow in the glossy lips of grasp, and intimacy that swims after me on oceans of illusion that flood my heart with my own island mirage of tears, and confusion that I use, to keep me canoeing, to keep me drifting and paddling, so that I won’t engulf the deep and go under in my own emptiness and anguish that’s berthed to my own floating dock of the brine and brackish marinade that makes up the saline swells, of my made up and lost at sea misery, that I cannot drown, that I cannot lose, that I cannot suffocate with wet air, as the cries of cut blood reign the breath, of its heartless resilience. Each torrent of relationship I sail on, I row mantically away in hollow words of affection, these misleads of my own mind that alter the winds that carry, dreams aloft in the wrong, direction. This is, my course. To never find that one thing in the whole, of everything that I don’t even know, if what I’m looking for is out there, or if it would even want me, if I found it. How could I? If I’ve never even seen, the map, to the land of glad and happiness let alone, the charts to faith and worth, in myself. Please, don’t climb aboard. I beg of you don’t throw, the rope. My palms are bloodied my oars are broke my tarp is torn as I flit toward the blight of my everyday. It’s easy, just take a, deep, breath… close your moistened eyes… and… let go… leave me, unanchored and afloat, without aim, shedding skin into the water as I whittle my way across the dessert of drench, and saliva. A heart, of he, and his, art, alone, with the dark and the waves that beckon, with the mist of bewailing finally, finally… finally. Found in the envelopment of first and last kisses that swam toward each other through the wishbones of waver and the last gasp of whispers whirling, in the never was, of meant to be. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a journey! Sad, then hopeful, and not unlike the course a lot of us take. Loved this one, and will leave me thinking more and more, the more I read it. Richy have you ever written with Helen (1slick_lady?) It is evident you share the same style. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How tremendously adventuresome, dear Richy. Your words are like a bunch of wildflowers held to the face, so full of colors and scent, that one can just drift away into a parallel dimension, where all things become possible. Incredible. Love, Margherita |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks so much Mysteria, yes Helen and I played with some words for a while but the poem never did appear from the mist... where is that little rat I swear I could just spank her for not being here for so long... Helen!!! Get your you know what back here... lol seriously... we all misss you dearly!!!!!!!! I hope she heard that ![]() |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Margy, Margy, Margy... what am I going to do with you?? I'm going to put you in a bottle I am and carry you around in my pocket for whenever I need a quick sip of your lovely spirit!! Thanks sweet. ![]() |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"glow in the glossy lips of grasp oceans of illusion that flood my heart with my own island mirage I sail on, I row mantically away in hollow words of affection My palms are bloodied my oars are broke my tarp is torn as I flit toward the blight of my everyday. the last gasp of whispers whirling, in the never was, of meant to be" ...definitely my very favorite of all your writes...so very much in this one (demands a few more reads, but, hey...I'm game...excellent write) ![]() |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
To never find that one thing in the whole, of everything that I don’t even know, if what I’m looking for is out there, or if it would even want me, if I found it. ************************************* You are a great dreamer of dreams and a chameleon of the impossible, now possible, you make me believe if for only a 3 minute ride on your poetry pole. ![]() ![]() |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks a ton Steven that means alot to me coming from you. ![]() |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
My dear Emma, might you possibly define, ride, for me please... ? lol, just teasing my poetess ![]() Some have a dream, in their soul, I am a dream, that has, a soul. Thanks love. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
That was quite an experience to share with you...I say as I realize I haven't read you enough...I'm kicking myself after reading this one. OMG what have I been missing?! Lori |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Haha, thanks Lori for coming along for the ride... no kicking now, we might crash lol You're the best! ![]() |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Damn, you can write ... and I love wandering your path of words and images and pieces of your thoughts. It's a wonderful wandering that I take with you. xoxoxo Richard. A |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh Alison you always give me such a big smile ![]() Honey you can wander with me anytime! (((You))) ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your deep emotion is like silk, it is so rich and smooth and always so soft to the touch. Sorry you and Helen didn't get your poem off the ground, I'm sure it would have been lovely. You both have a special gift. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I don't know about riding on your poetry pole but anyone who comes up with row mantically is aces in my book! ![]() |
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