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Open Poetry #47

another day closer

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-04-01 02:10 AM

I miss you
I wait for you
I pray for sleep
to bring you
another day closer
to home
to me
my love

LGR(C)4/1/11

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-04-01 02:52 AM

I'll wish with you because this is such a special little poem. You make me smile inside out.

A

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-04-01 07:07 AM

Thanks Ms A, what you say makes me feel good inside and out

Lori

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-04-01 11:21 AM

Smiling...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-04-01 12:54 PM

Very lovely in its essentiality, dear Lori.

Love,
Margherita

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2011-04-01 07:54 PM

Very concise but displays such a depth of yearning.

Well done Lori

Get home to that woman she needs you!

Eric.....smiling.....

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-04-01 08:17 PM

Here another one saying he hopes the road to home and you is short and sweet.

~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~

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