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Open Poetry #47

No ones words.....

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

0 posted 2011-03-30 08:51 AM

I love you today,
I loved you yesterday,
No ones words will
change that.
For all the beauty
there was about you,
I can see past all
thru that.
For no mortal man,
is with out flaws
that what makes us
human.
But the better half
of you always shined
thru,and I loved you
deeply for that.
And that is how I'll
remember you,
in the remainder
of my days,
Your warmth and grace
wont be erased,
and all the love you
gave....

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-03-30 10:00 AM

This too is very lovely, dear dreamgal, your gratitude and kindness are very nicely expressed. You are wise.

Love,
Margherita

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

2 posted 2011-03-30 10:21 AM

Thank you again Margherita! I always like to read your poetry, your so thoughtful.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-03-30 11:26 AM

this is so heartfelt and beautifully expressed...just lovely!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

4 posted 2011-03-30 12:17 PM

Thank you again faithmairee, it was dedicated to my father...
The best that there was.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-03-30 03:04 PM

An admirable poem about your father, dreamgal, the love shows through each and every line.

~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2011-03-30 03:31 PM

Ah, your heart is speaking and remembering. Good read, my friend.

enjoyed...

j.

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

7 posted 2011-03-30 05:17 PM

Thank you, Jerry & dwesley,for your thoughtful words, he was and always will be
number 1 to me, he really was loved by so many people. When he passed, there were alot of sad people. But instead of sadness I try and smile now when I think of him and grateful I had him in my life.

twistedpup
Member

since 2011-02-25

Posts 115

8 posted 2011-03-30 09:24 PM

this was a very sweet right. i enjoyed it.
and yes you are your number one.

*hugs*

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