Open Poetry #47 |
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sometimes when i dream |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA ![]() |
there is not a day that goes by that i don't think of you remembering all the good times we shared and the sorrowful ones you helped to see me through i know that you're in heaven because there is no other place someone as beautiful as you could be just to gaze into your soulful eyes was such a precious thing sometimes, i feel your spirit lurking in places we have been and i am grateful when i feel you here as your comforting smile draws near sometimes when i dream you are still here with me so clear it almost seems real you were so very special to me it's not so much i am grieving i am merely missing you thinking fond thoughts of you for you see there is a special place in my heart where our treasured memories will always be There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
I simply loved your poem.I sometimes think of my grandparents up there doing well. ![]() |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
I liked this, I think of my father often, and my sister and I know there around in spirit and in my heart always, very touching poem, thanks for sharing. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
To have that feeling linger and comfort is like a Heavenly backrub. ~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely poem, Faith. I feel this way about Flicka, Tigger and Daisy, my horse, cat and dog - and yes, they DO smile, in their own way. Tears Owl |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Faith...Holding the memories of our lost loved ones in our hearts is something we all cherish. Hopefully your memories will comfort you in time of need...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh yes, we miss our loved ones, it is indeed so comforting when they come to us in dreams. Enjoyed your loving poem very much. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is lovely and memories are precious as art, thanks faithmairee. yann |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Faith - Maybe the dream IS real and this just our ... fantasy. I'm sure the person you are remembering has read your poem and is happy. Helen |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
This was pretty special Faith, and so are you. Richard ![]() |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"it's not so much i am grieving i am merely missing you" ...for those of us missing others, you have articulated it beautifully...thank you for sharing |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you all for your wonderful remarks. I appreciate them so much. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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