Heartsleeve’s Invitation

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Open Poetry #47

Heartsleeve’s Invitation

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-03-29 10:23 AM

Heartsleeve pressed her body
against the glass
responding to his gaze
She mouthed the
obvious invitation
to his wanton willing
Teasing his temptation
knowing full well
whatever she did
he would
leave her untouched

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-03-29 10:39 AM

Damn! Don't you just hate days like that, Lori? I was getting into this and at the end you bushwhacked me. Nice going.

~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2011-03-29 11:03 AM

Love it - but OUCH! Very well written, my friend.

j.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2011-03-29 10:56 PM

Lori, wonderful. I want to have written it. Is there a story behind this poem? Perhaps I am being nosey ... okay, I am. But, it leaves me wanting ~

more.

A

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