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ethome
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0 posted 2011-01-12 03:09 AM



This haven's for thoughts
With many topics in mind
Two a day is kind


Siamese twins move to England so the other one can learn how to drive!

© Copyright 2011 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-01-12 08:27 AM


Tis true Eric, this place is a haven! And the way some people write it seems like heaven
Lori

ethome
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2 posted 2011-01-12 08:41 AM


Yep, and you're one of them!

Thanks for the read and the comment.

Eric

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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3 posted 2011-01-12 09:01 AM


righghhghghght on eric..
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2011-01-12 09:31 AM


Yes, to savor the delicacies as they deserve and to give our full attention to them, they should be offered one/two at a time.

It's not like dieting, it's like being true gourmets

Perfect, dear Eric.

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
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5 posted 2011-01-12 10:41 AM


Yup. Actually one of the better poetry sites around in my opinion, although of course and drat, nothing is perfect, eh?

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
6 posted 2011-01-12 10:48 AM


Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
7 posted 2011-01-12 12:35 PM


wonderful words from a wonderful poet...great little poem...love it's brevity and wisdom!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

steavenr
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8 posted 2011-01-12 02:20 PM


...yes...to the point I found my heart smiling...enjoyed
ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
9 posted 2011-01-12 02:23 PM


Thank ya DS I appreciate the appreciate.

Eric

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Margherita

You got it absolutely right on!
I thank you for that.

Like the dieting reference....I need to be on one he heh....

Eric

ethome
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Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
10 posted 2011-01-12 02:25 PM


You're right Jerry one of the best if not the best.
Too true nothing is perfe.............cccccctttt!

Eric

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Thank you so much for the visit Trina and take care. I appreciated the comment.

Eric

Siamese twins move to England so the other one can learn how to drive!

tracie66
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Australia
11 posted 2011-11-15 04:37 AM


well done, most enjoyable

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
12 posted 2011-11-15 07:52 AM


Good to see you again, Eric. Nice senryu.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

suthern
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since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
13 posted 2011-11-15 08:11 AM


I'm glad this came back up... both so I could read... and so I could send a belated happy birthday to you!! *S* I hope it was a great one!!!
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
14 posted 2011-11-15 07:35 PM


~ and I always enjoy reading your thoughts!
~ Even if they were to come in two or three at a time!


Linda

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
15 posted 2011-11-17 01:42 PM


Always enjoy your writing, Eric. Good to see you here again.
                             Ida

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