Open Poetry #47 |
Fog of Destiny |
Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Fog of Destiny It crept in during the night And it lingers this morning Surrounding my brain In thick wisps Perfectly content to stay And harass me Curled comfortably Into the crevices of my think tank And not even gallons of Earl Gray Can disperse it this day Making this poem Seem impossible to write Making this tea cup Seem impossible to hold Making this day Seem impossible to start |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Marti, You expressed this beautifully. I have had those foggy mornings - and, as much as I love fog, I hate when it hits my brain. Loving this this snowy morning. A |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yep, I can relate...and then the fog lifts at bedtime...go figure! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, switch to some good old Community Coffee Dark Roast, that's chase Destiny's fog outta there. Enjoyed the poem. Been there. Done that. ~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, my dear sweet Marti, this is so intense and poignant, may the fog dissolve and may the clear skies of your beautiful mind be victorious. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seems all encompassing sometimes doesn't it? You have captured the moment well. Great job Marti! I'll take my EG with just a touch of milk, not too strong, thanks.....smile... Eric |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is very beautiful Marti, but there is an undercurrent, together with something you have said previously, that speaks of pain and that worries me. Owl |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Alison, nothing worse than a foggy brain day! Thank you, ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Lori, thank you for your reply. I appreciate your comment. My fog is still hanging in there a little bit today but my energy has returned!! ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
JerryPat2 - thank for your reply and suggestion. Unfortunately, I do not care for coffee. I am strictly a tea drinker. ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Margherita, my friend, thank you so much. Unfortunately, it comes with the territory and lately, it's been foggier than it has been in awhile. However, I do have some energy today and managed to get a few things accomplished!! ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Eric, yes, it does seem all encompassing and I don't like it! But, what's a person to do? I ove my EG with milk (no cream) and a tad bit of sugar. It's the best. Thanks for your kind comment. ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Ms. Owl, please don't worry. I have MS and brain fog is very common. Along with many other things but the fog and fatigue are the worst. I am feeling much better today and love you for your concern. Thank you, ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nothing foggy about your writing, Martie. Glad to hear you are feeling better. Ida |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Thanks Ida! It comes and goes! Been feeling pretty good lately. Thank God!!! ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved this Marti! Gads, I think my head looks like that most of the time...Very well worded, my friend and fits perfectly with the picture. j. |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Thanks j. Brain fog is the worst! ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yes, I know Marti. That was what I was referring to. I will try not to worry. It seems unfair that I am so healthy. I wish I could give you and a whole lot of others some of it each. Owl |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Owl, be grateful you are healthy. I am doing okay and as you can see I am at a point where I can actually write poetry. For a long time I couldn't. I may have MS, but MS doesn't have me!! I am so grateful for my friends at PiP, a loving, kind and caring hubby, 3 great kids and 3 fantastic grandbabies! ooxx Marti |
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