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Painted Blue |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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You are the essence of my fantasies whispering in my ear like a rustle in the breeze tells me what I long to hear. Like a kite flies in the sky with anticipation that exceeds when you take me to the limit my hearts desire you appease. You are the soft and tangible touch cast and captured on my sea the sun that sets behind closed eyes shaded blue, enraptures me. To the brink where I am pushed releasing me as I let go connecting with my heart strings there to catch me when I fall. You are the cloud I'm drifting through fitting in the missing piece completing that which puzzles me a wonder that will never cease. Seasoning my appetite the main course on my menu you are the vintge in my wine an endless panoramic view. Like flowers line a pathway you are the bouquet in my garden in the here where we are now before the twilight darkens. You are the stroke upon my brush the painting in the picture our time within the frame for all my days, you'll linger. r/w |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
WoW! Blues, don't hold back, tell us really how you feel, you'll feel better after you do. This was intense in the area of love personified, with just enough lust to keep it interesting. I loved both emotions. ~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are truly such a kind and loving person. Whoever inspired this is fortunate indeed.  |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
This is really nice. Filled with love and trust. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Jp~ Thank you for always being so forthcoming and encouraging me with your replies. Much appreciated. serenity~ What a nice thing to say. Thank you. It pleases me so much to have you stop by to read me. Emmarose~ Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to leave them for me. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Well if its painted blue, then blue must be the color of passion  Enjoyed.-Trina |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautifully romantic piece. Wonderful metaphors of love and loyalty. Very enjoyable read. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Lori, one could rest peacefully with feelings like this lingering above their final resting place. As much as I try I can’t really explain the emotions that arise from such beauty. Whether this person knows how you feel, or ever will, how lucky is he that someone so special could hold him, so close. What a gorgeous picture you’ve painted Bluesy, of your own loving heart. (((You))) Richard xo |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you for sharing, I'm so touched in the lift and lilt of your beautiful blues. ~Karen [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (03-28-2011 04:32 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
innocent1~ Love your reply, yes I think blue is the color of passion. Works for me. Thanks. Thank you ethome~ It's always so nice to see your name here. I mean that. Richy~ Aww well heck...you are very special to me. Thank you for your knowing reply and for always being so kind. Yes, the lingering is a wonderful keepsake. x/o Hi Lassy~~What a nice surprise. Thank you so much for your sweet reply. (why did you edit out what you first wrote, which I read at work but couldn't login to reply. So thank you for that too) Ok, I'm off to read your June. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I edited, because it seemed presumptious, but I truly was delighted feeling the connection! ~K |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You make me want to linger in the beauty of these feelings and emotions, so charmfully expressed, dear Lori. Love your inspiration in blue, truly a gem. Love, Margherita  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Not only is this a splendid poem that reads with so much love and imagry. This poem also showcases what a loving person you are. We are lucky to able to read this poem and learn a bit more about you and how special you are. Alison |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Romanticism most fine! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Blues...Tender words from your heart. Enjoyed very much.Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue...you do make blue a favorite color....lovely work ms |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Never any doubt, in my mind, about the writer or her heart - from first to last word...and then again... j. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi Bluesy - Love has never been as beautiful as when painted blue by you. The heart must be truly open to write something so lovely and meaningful. Hugs Helen |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Beautifully romantic!!! Kat >^..^< |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
'beautiful', 'lovely', 'romantic', 'inspired'...doesn't leave much room for those of us who are word-challenged to describe this wonderful write...so I'll just say I enjoyed its rapture (and go back and read it again) |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are one of the few poets who can do romantic poetry really well, Blues. This is a fine example of that. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
You paint a happy picture here, and do it well, although the choice you made for the final word portrays a hint of sadness. |
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