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Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2011-03-25 10:10 PM

..what is key about Kyoka is that they're supposed to be humorous..they use irony, sarcasm, satire, wry
humor, making fun of oneself, making FUN, and spoofing.so, i'm wondering if the kyoka, here, meets
Kyoka standards..because someone told me it wasn't
humorous..
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Kyoka..missing rungs
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--stuck atop a tree,
door slammer who delights
in startling?
my ladder is missing rungs
and my arms shake!
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..(C) 2011 Spiros Zafiris
..mostly channeled; spirit Harmony
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-03-25 11:03 PM

I think it is funny, well, at least humorous, Spiros. Damn, you're in a tree, your ladder is missing some rungs and you're arms are shaking from total fear.

Gotta love it.

~ Look hard behind you and you'll be able to maneuver around the pitfalls ahead of you. ~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-03-25 11:03 PM

I think it is funny, well, at least humorous, Spiros. Damn, you're in a tree, your ladder is missing some rungs and you're arms are shaking from total fear.

Gotta love it.

~ Look hard behind you and you'll be able to maneuver around the pitfalls ahead of you. ~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-03-25 11:04 PM

I think it is funny, well, at least humorous, Spiros. Damn, you're in a tree, your ladder is missing some rungs and you're arms are shaking from total fear.

Gotta love it.

~ Look hard behind you and you'll be able to maneuver around the pitfalls ahead of you. ~

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

4 posted 2011-03-25 11:07 PM

How did you get up a tree without rungs on your ladder? LOL.
Kat >^..^<

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2011-03-25 11:16 PM

"--Stuck atop a tree,
door slammer who delights
in startling?
my ladder is missing rungs
and my arms shake!"
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..friends, perhaps i should have used quotation marks..what is happening in this poem (it may not be clear enough!) is that
the narrator is addressing a door slammer
(a neighbor), who is stuck atop a tree
..spiros
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katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

6 posted 2011-03-25 11:25 PM

Ohhh I get it now ! LOL
Kat

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2011-03-26 12:36 PM

Well it would certainly be humorous to the neighbour.
I like that..."door slammer"

I enjoyed your write Spiros. Not as much as Jerry, he laughed three times....smile....

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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