Open Poetry #47 |
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A Garden District Oracle |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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* * * In answer to the question that you never deigned to take to task: I do not think you ask too much I don't believe you ever asked; you stood there like an orphanage illuminated by the tact of coppering gone verdigris and twinings of the walk-me plant nestling the shift of slate in burial of fact-- purslane blooming in the sun as mold depressed the colonnade velveteen in fingerings of every stop someone had past leaning on the post- a child in noisy crinoline and wrinkles in her leggings, (grin) she's offering the lemonade for six cents a cup and that was strained to order "hold the pulp" in answer to the question that you never thought to ask. * * * |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Had to look up "verdigris," but the rest of this was an easy, delightful, if catty read. "A Garden District Oracle" gives the answers to unasked questions, and for some strange reason I began to think of the philosophical bent of Walker Percy, one of my favorite Louisiana novelists, of which there are many of course. Don't know why Percy cane to mind, except that he was so high minded, but could still get down in the dirt and mud with you. These lines just blew me away, "as mold depressed the colonnade / velveteen in fingerings / of every stop someone had past" That, then, just about says it all, doesn't it? ~ Look hard behind you and you'll be able to maneuver around the pitfalls ahead of you. ~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm glad you like it, Jer. It's a slightly re-worked repost, and somehow I feel like it's still evolving. And I did post it for you, knowing that you would just know. Inspiration: The Roman Candy vendors (which are conspicuously absent) When I get my land legs back, I think I'll take a bus to take the streetcar to see what I can't see. ![]() Thanks for reading. ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I love of edginess of your poetry. Always a nice read, serenity~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Had to look up verdigris too but that would never stop me from delighting in your poetry, Karen. Ida |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks so much Ida, and Blues Serenade. I once made a list of words I hate, but verdigris is a word I love. *smile* I kinda grew up with it, since metal turns so quickly in high humidity. Swamp. ![]() My love and gratitude to you all, and truly, The Garden District of New Orleans is...well, it IS. If you love architecture and old oak trees, it's a must-see stop in New Orleans. ![]() |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I got the verdigris (from my days in the furniture business I suppose) but pray tell, what is a walk-me plant? ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ohhhhhh....those are just great--purslane, for the most part. It's a lovely but tough plant that can tolerate the pressure of people and other heavy beings walking on them. I once saw an entire yard of the stuff--on tv though. My father once sank sacks of concrete with spaces between and planted purslane (or parslane?) in between the sacks that eventually turned to a rough hewn looking stone. Funny you should bring this up, because I was just thinking it would make a lovely border for a vegetable garden. ![]() (I tend to like more naturalistic looking gardens.) Thank you, stevenr. ![]() |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Although I cannot quite put my nose upon its essence, the nostalgic feel to this historical narration rings true of what made a deep impression upon the world of a young girl growing up in your neck of the woods. This is my impression, right or wrong ![]() I enjoyed its breath of originality. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
I perceive the voice of experience in this. Ah, those shifting slates. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Many memories this evokes, my friend, and loved the use of verdigris ( a fancy word for rust), which you seldom see used anymore. I miss the old city of 50 or so years ago, not the one of today. Reminiscence speaking. j. |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I don't think there will ever be a moment where you don't floor me.. ever. |
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