Open Poetry #47 |
tinseled silk |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
when silver threads of moonlight sheds its glances gleamed o’er lovers’ lives the rays of night shine soft and bright illuming hearts of those who thrive on tinseled silk of orb-lit strains that melt the hearts to one of twain as silver shreds of light embrace the loves, the lives, the hearts in place of night-rays interlaced with star-spun sparkles of warmth |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
another beautiful poem so well-written...i enjoy your work so much! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Tinseled silk. Love it. The title, the word play, everything. Well done. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very elegant and captivating, dear Steaven! Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
You really understand the wheretofore of poetry writing which tugs at the readers emotion and heartstrings. Gotta love it! Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
faithm, I do so appreciate your kind reflections…you are very generous…thank you Trina, I, too liked the phrase best (I had no title for a while, so I just took for it my favorite words from it)…but, I digress…thank you Margherita, thank you for stopping by and reading…always count your opinions highly JerryPat, many thanks for such high praise…you are far too generous…I am humbled |
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