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Open Poetry #47

Spring Cleaning

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-03-24 12:25 PM

Spring cleaning
neglected corners and webs
appalled at the accumulation
of clutter and dread
taking a ride
to clear my head

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-03-24 12:35 PM

Ha! I know how this feels. Made for a neat poem. I enjoyed it.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-03-24 01:27 PM

Yep, sometimes in the far reaches of our minds dust and cobwebs will accrue, Lori.

~ Look hard behind you and you'll be able to maneuver around the pitfalls ahead of you. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-03-24 01:50 PM

Faith & Jerry, Thanks for hanging around while I blow the cobs out!

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

4 posted 2011-03-24 07:50 PM

Cute poem, enjoyed the rhymes.
Kat >^..^<

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2011-03-25 12:26 PM

I wanna go. I shake my head and things rattle among the dust bunnies!!!

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