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there must be a poem in here somewhere |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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a kiss in the dark a long lost love a cherished pet grace from above a favorite song a dream come true the gripping pain from losing you a lovely sunset a friendship betrayed a critical moment my nerves are frayed no matter what life sends my way in the back of my mind (amidst the joy or fear) i'm always thinking there must be a poem in here somewhere There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Ah, you've gone and done it again. Love your style (I'll stop saying that after this time) and your take on the life you see, live and believe. And yes, my friend, there definitely IS a poem in there. Period. Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake! |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you, JerryPat. You just made my heart smile  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I love this,enjoyed it very much. latearrival |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
There must be indeed. We share the same thoughts. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms faith....they say there is a poem in every sound or thought we imagine...enjoyed this... sent you a email link to another writer you might enjoy. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very beautiful way to look at life's events and to "elaborate" them. Love, Margherita |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
thank you all very much...i appreciate your wonderful remarks so much! Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent, faithmariee. It must be a "poet" thing I do the same thing. ida |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Ida-It must be a poet thing Thanks for the wonderful compliment! Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
every time I've read your writes, I've noticed your tag line and hoped you would eventually include it as a write...was not disappointed...not by a long shot |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Yes. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, I can relate completely... especially in the middle of a crisis, I'm thinking, "there must be a lesson in here somewhere that I'll be able to share... later..." Because I've often found that some of the best poems have a story in them that is relative to others.  Enjoyed! |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
steavenr-that so nice of you to say...thank you! XGarapanX-thanks for stopping by and for your response Sunshine-thanks much for your wonderful comments. Glad you enjoy my poem! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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