Open Poetry #47 |
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Cardboard and Whispers |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA ![]() |
"Cardboard and Whispers" The street is quiet, solemn, cold before dawn, pangs of hunger sound the alarm as hands that used to finger coins in pockets are rubbed together for warmth, before a rising, pale yellow sun, that scratches the thin sky like sandpaper. Tattered attire adorning weary forms that once blended in with others through days of diligent labor, now rush to scavenge through the park’s refuse cans. The door of the corner gas station is missing as they wash at a filth coated sink in barely running rust stained water soap a thing of the past memories of cleansing morning rituals disappearing challenged by day to day survival. Outside the sidewalk is cracked, scarred, as calloused as their faith. There’s cardboard and wooden crates in the alley, tonight’s suburbia for the first come, first served. Pushing supermarket carts of hope, they search for coveted recyclables, bounty from tipped over, dented trash cans, amid moans of the young and the old, no discrimination on the streets of broken dreams. They’re the disowned, forgotten, the helpless, the leftovers of society, someone’s mother or the not quite yet man, the discards of uncaring relations with bibles on their food laden tables of indulgence. They walk as the deaf, the blind, unheard, unseen. They are our brothers, sisters, they are withering, they are dying . . . can we not hear them? See their eyes open in quiet screams? They are those who scrounge for the discards of our pampered lives. the aborted by-products of down sizing, Those whom we scorn and scurry by, for our hearts fear and whisper, “There but for the grace of God go I.” © Marcia Miller-Twiford |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is a sensitive and compassionate look at those who have fallen on hard times. Whether they themselves or society has caused this, the fact is they are a reality and whatever the cause, it is very sad that this is the case. It is very easy to be compassionate on reading this in a poetry forum, but it takes a golden soul to do so, in the world out there. My personal and humble opinion is – with “give a man a fish and you feed him for a day, teach him how to fish and you feed him for a lifetime” in mind, that we and/or society need to find a way to help them help themselves. I think that we would be surprised if we knew the stories of each one. We are inclined to make certain presumptions – or at least I was – until I found amongst unsalaried car guards at a local supermarket, somebody who was highly intelligent and learned very quickly and easily and whom I had taught French to when he was a university student and who went on to getting an Honours degree in History. The following lines cut to the bone: they are withering, they are dying . . . can we not hear them? See their eyes open in quiet screams Thank you for turning our glance to this corner of humanity, Marcia. Owl |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Thank you for reading and caring. I don't see any solution except to help if, when, and where we can. Marcia |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
and to reach out where it is least expected... |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I agree with Owl, not much more to say! enjoyed your poem. Kat >^..^< |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I don't think a photograph could have captured a clearer picture than the one you painted with your words. Excellent Lori |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is an amazingly emotive write...I would have had to copy the whole write to tell you which part I liked best, but I will say that "memories of cleansing morning rituals disappearing challenged by day to day survival" is the line that reached out and commanded that I pay closer attention. I not only need to back and re-read, but want to do so. Excellent work. You've given a fine tribute to those of our society we probably ignore most often. |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Thank you seems inadequate but please know that I say it with utmost sincerity. Marcia |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Captures the sad reality of our sad world in a profound and caring way. Very thought provoking. Ida |
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