Open Poetry #47 |
Of Couplet And Cadence |
Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
The air was sweaty, as I jumped through the fog and dropped a word, into the sky. Each one that fell towards the summit of earths breath, rippled in damp spasm undulating outwards in concentric vibrations of sopping ringlets wringing wet with swell and savory, titilating in parlance as they breached the jetty into the mouth, of your narrows. There you were standing, in the doorway of exodus with the odor of gasp, on your breath trickling down onto the carnal sculpture of your teeming bust as I swallowed a pill of air with a glass, of your river, your marble eyes rolling back as you arched, licking the canopy of the headlands squeezing my mustache between your stems your fingers in my hair pulling, shortening the spread, of the outskirts of your duress. Come with me as we plant our souls together and watch them drip in intertwine, as they grow as one toward the ceiing, of time. This, silent poem of ours is creamy, at its base with verses of violet and temporary tatoos of panting handprints, made with the slapping psalms of couplet and cadence, and drooling bitemarks scratched, into backs of chiseled meter, and hymn. I’ve grown tired of waiting. You, will be mine. Through every no uttered, there is a million grunts and screams of, YES. You’ve already had, me in your nightly secrets, with your back to your lover, or naked and damp underneath multi faceted shower heads, cleansing over and over, and over, this scene of your forgiven sins. Have me, Now, deep and plunging into the shallow of your sodden denial, that never discovered spot in the back of you, is for me, and me, only. All I ever wanted, was someone to share, the right regrets with. It’s taken me half of my life to even understand, what, it is. Come with me, on this day, to help me not understand, the last half. As the sun tears through another virgin sky, as a plant looks up, from his morning drink. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Fannin' myself here, boy I am so ready to bask beneath the summer sun and drink the blue sky in. What a steamy racy rise you got outta me. Oh boy, this is one succulent and ever so seductive poem. blowin' my bangs off my forehead. phew! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Haha... Make that two blue sky's and I'll join you Bluesy... You are too funny lol Thanks for the sweet review. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..nice one, Richy; a treat to read..spiros |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Seduction at its best, dear Richy! I get this vision of surfing the highest waves of passion ... Quite impressive really! Love and smiles. Margherita |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"All I ever wanted, was someone to share, the right regrets with." Of course! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Richy...falling into the cadence of this waterfall...what a rush!! |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
There is always a whirl in your world of writing. It truly moves me along the page start to finish. Much enjoyed ! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Richard, I have a confession to make! I read all of your poems so fast (on the first read through!!!) that my whizzing eyes make me dizzy! On the second and third and fourth reads, I read them slowly ~ absorbing and visualizing every scintillating line! Linda |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Spiros - Thank you for stopping by kind sir, I appreciate your valuable time. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I've got a board for two Margy, get behind me and hold on, and I'll show you some waves that you've never even dreamed about. Love ya |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Charly my fine sir, I consider it a sincere honor anytime you make your presence on one of my scribbles... thank you dear man for your kind thoughts. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Martie, you know I'm right there at the bottom waiting to catch you... just so you know... I might not let go for awhile... (((Hugs you))) |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you EmmaRose, that means alot to me coming from you! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I'll tell you Linda, I write these silly things so fast that I don't even recognize them when I happen to bump into them later down the road... Thank you honeybee, you are such a sweetheart!! Richard |
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