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Dearest Dad...
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Dearest Dad... |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
I still see you sitting on the front porch sit you'd say in your typical way... With nothing to say I'd walk away No time for mindless chatter today.... Gotta go Gotta play cant stay not okay Deep regret haunts me today Id give anything to hear you say just one more day.... Sit and stay. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Even when we are much much older and lose our parents at a later stage in life, there is always the wonder..."did I give back as much as s/he gave me?" I'm going to enjoy your contributions, Denise. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, we miss the jewels of life so often, and thinking back is painful at times. Nice work. ~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I too, have had thoughts and feelings such as yours. You captured them perfectly. We have our memories to keep us warm ~ if only we had taken the time to make more... Giving you a warm, compassionate hug, EA |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Thank you all for your heartfelt responses, I appreciate them look forward to reading your poetry as well. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
very good. Enjoyed and remembered back~~~~ latearrival |
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